卍龍少卍

Recently our school building is going to be pulled down as part of the redevelopment of the area.

Without doubt,there are many drawback.In the build of period,their will make more pullution,
such as hearing pollution,views pollution,environment pollution....They all will make people feel sick
,annoying and uncomfortable.Besides,it will be make stundts cannot to pay attention on the book
.Of course,the teachers are certainly can't teach the book.

Although there are many disadvantage,their can be aviod.First,the school building can pulled
down as part while in the evening.So the won't have a problem of block thecher or students have
a lessons.Second,we can grow some trees around the pollution area,so they will decrease the
pollution problems.

Furthermover,their also will bring us many benefits.First,when they will been finished,their
can build more new building.The new building can be more advanced where can have high-technology
house,big computer rooms and big area to playing activities.Moreover they can be make more
beautiful of the school appearances.

Finally,The adventages are more than drawback,so i think pulled down as part of school building is
a good idea.
請吊得就吊,我想拿level2,故今晚要see曬本grammar,Hope俾多d評語

[ 本帖最後由 卍龍少卍 於 2009-5-7 08:18 PM 編輯 ]

s041

你好大劑   grammar唔少錯
ps

"First,the school building can pulled down as part while in the night"
明顯犯法不可行

makazaik

Second,we can grow some trees around the pollution area,so they will decreace the
pollutin problems.

around the polluted area??
so the pollution problems can be reduced

晉少

such as hearing pollution,views pollution,environment pollution
應該係noise pollution ,同visual pollution

卍龍少卍

禁係味得一等

jacky0620

Of cause

卍龍少卍

請問有無d代替first ,second個d字

johntwk

好多Chinglish...

littledragon

點解不停用their??
their都唔係咁用
比多d拓展

lesley91418

of coz, some word can represent first, second, last..
First-> First and foremost,To begin with,To start with
Second->In addition,What's more,Apart from....
Last->To summarize,In recapitulation,Last but by no means least,Last but by no account
least..and so on.

tonylau0402

first of all,first and the foremost,first off

coolan114

they=他們
their=他們的


既然目標唔高,不如用返d簡單d o既 tenses算啦~
個be 唔易用..
用唔好反而會自曝其短,,肥左就唔好啦…

加油加油!!

s9801222000

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原帖由 卍龍少卍 於 2009-5-7 07:55 PM 發表
Recently our school building is going to be pulled down as part of the redevelopment of the area.

Without doubt,there are many drawback.In the build of period,their will make more pullution,
...

有好多地方錯= =

樂`信~

放心鍋.....一定有 level two..
D 人係到嚇你成日,,,
我上年考作到成個屎咁,
我肯定 grammar 百錯...因為上年我好差英文..
咁都有 leveel two 啦...
我作左唔夠 半個鐘就訓咗..
邊個會 grammar 無錯..岩晒咩
你估小卒個個D 都係名師咩...
係咁就個個 level 5* 啦..
邊有咁多人 level2 ...
所以唔洗怕.......
因為我作文都好屎..雖然讀左中六進步左..

ps:今日 D 題目 1b 淺D 我覺得