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係our dear opponent ← debate用語, 我以前打debate
第一件事一定係, 你支唔支持, 文字要好淺白, today's motion must stand/ must not stand
I would be discussing → I would like to discuss
句子太chunky, 唔夠 concise同precise
開頭直接係environmental, economic aspects DONE!
see VS recognise VS understand
無實例, elaboration都唔係好算係, 只不過係來黎來去都係講埋同一樣野, 你要真係同其他energy有comparision eg fossil fuel(coal) emission of carbon dioxide →global warming ( X Greenhouse effect ) →the ices at the poles melts, habitat...
→ content 分上唔到好高
grammar → tense 好多都錯
I will move on to my second point → 好簡單: Secondly/ Next 或者link上面transition都得, 但係呢句咁寫先唔似debate