啊聰

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原帖由 mcmancm 於 2013-3-7 09:44 PM 發表
godofeng言論出位，可惜缺乏建設作用，並且爭咁d娛樂性，此花生不好吃也，可惜可惜！

娛樂性 = =''

sai1991ku

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原帖由 christinali 於 2013-3-9 11:38 PM 發表


要搵到你錯處有幾難...真係好多

如果真係冇問題 我又會咁得閒話你囉 定係你唔肯接受自己英文根本仲係同一般水平有一段距離既事實呢?

車..你又唔post文係度 即係你唔比人知你自己咩程度...咪可以週圍串人...扮勁

我澳洲老師早就話比我知錯左幾多同錯咩啦

上次果篇有約47個grammar 錯佔總字數3%(逐個字數(用不用send比你看)
我係post係度係為左看下內容上有冇問題

[ 本帖最後由 sai1991ku 於 2013-3-9 11:49 PM 編輯 ]

sai1991ku

Hong Kong is definitely (a) blessed city in the world but also is a pressured city. There are equal opportunity, thorough legal system, laws and the raising standard of education in Hong Kong. All of them are the key (for Hong Kong) to be a finance centre in Asia raising the motivation of foreign investment and providing enough talents. However, the progress of economics (economic) development have (has) inevitably generated the gap between the rich and the poor with political problems leading (to) different controversies of welfare and others social issues like old-age allowance, national education and so on. Therefore some foreign newspapers have described Hong Kong as the capital of protest. Nevertheless, we need to completely reconsider whether Hong Kong is a good place. The different elements of the achievement(situation) that we need to reconsider are the situation of (the) environment, the economic development, the education system and the situation of policy of Hong Kong.




這係其中一部份個澳洲老師改ge

christinali

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原帖由 sai1991ku 於 2013-3-9 11:48 PM 發表


車..你又唔post文係度 即係你唔比人知你自己咩程度...咪可以週圍串人...扮勁

我澳洲老師早就話比我知錯左幾多同錯咩啦

上次果篇有約47個grammar 錯佔總字數3%(逐個字數(用不用send比你看)
我係post係度係 ...

得啦 巴閉啦 有澳洲老師教 玩晒啦

P.S. 你計下平均錯佔總句數幾多先la.

christinali

望第一眼已經見到唔只得果幾個 洗唔洗講俾你聽錯咩?

sai1991ku

你post左你作ge文..先講....我就服你同信你

christinali

The different elements of the achievement(situation) that we need to reconsider are the situation of (the) environment, the economic development, the education system and the situation of policy of Hong Kong.

呢段野成段都講到一舊舊啦    

仲有

financial center not finance

都講左" pressured " city 好怪

仲有, 你寫nevertheless 做乜? 你知唔知呢個字點解

不如你話我知你中文想表達D咩.. 我真係睇完都唔明(指你岩岩copy果一大段)

你話我知之後我再用英文作返出黎, okay?

[ 本帖最後由 christinali 於 2013-3-10 12:04 AM 編輯 ]

sai1991ku

費事再同你駡戰

唔同d只懂串人又唔比人知自已實力ge人chat

godofeng

em35

Mitzi

過路人: 上面 '傾' 得好激烈...以事論事,對英文先會有幫助;人生攻擊,都只係浪費時間..
Btw, godofeng寫得好好..英文真係要'浸', 多聽多睇多讀,先會有回報...

...傑...

咁如果中4下學期開始浸o唔ok
如果真係浸主要可以記d咩vocab or 睇d咩

zenc115193

條題目我都唔知佢up咩春點做/

godofeng

咪吾好做,你想人比咩反應你?同情?教導?考試係自己考.想放棄既我誠心祝賀R.I.P

Btw回應41#仲有時間,你肯花時間心機去學習,why not?the only obstacle is yourself.

autodidactsara

我想... 通常可以清楚list out你的文法錯誤的人，大多是有一定的英文水平。平心靜氣吧。

autodidactsara

現在開始發力，一定有機會lvl 5。

最基本的做法：多些看報紙，記生字，寫文。

也歡迎你來我們的blog和youtube channel看看，是希望幫學生自學英文的。

http://autodidact12.blogspot.hk/
http://www.youtube.com/user/autodidact2012