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[Eng] ENG Writing/ 自修生/ 比下Grade同意見/ Thanks a lot

ENG Writing/ 自修生/ 比下Grade同意見/ Thanks a lot

You are Chris Wong, a member of the school Debating Club. A few days ago, you went to a debate competition where the debate motion was" Tests and exams are a barrier to learning".You were impressed by argument presented by both sides. Write an essay discussing the pros and cons of having test and exams in education.



Standardized test, good in some ways, bad in others





There is no doubt that the dominant culture of education has come to focus on not teaching and learning, but testing. Examination has a place in education, particularly in Hong Kong. However, some academics have come across a saying of " Tests and exams are a barrier to learning ". In this following point, this essay aims to examine its pros and cons objectively.

First of all, It is easy to see the clear and obvious benefits from having tests and examinations. Standardized test has its function to assess the student's academic performances so that any school, including universities, secondary schools and even kindergartens, adopts this measure to collect students. As a result, testing is a way to get into schools, because it is the most fair and objective method to evaluate their performances. As regards educators, they could have a greater guidance to teach their students in terms of standardized teaching contents and materials.

Moreover, examination is a  diagnostic measure, which is the core value of examination. Each student has their own problems for study but it is very case-by-case. Nevertheless, testing provides the teachers to realize and discover their problems for study immediately and therefore significantly improve their academic performances in the long run; for instance, Finland comes out on top in mathematics, science and physics. Finland's education regards testing as diagnostic measure, which is to seek their student's problems for study and help them break through the difficulties. Yet, assessment should be a diagnostic functions rather than a competition.

Besides benefits, the overvaluation of testing has its drawbacks. The essential objective of education is to get people to learn. Children are naturally gravitating towards knowledge. However, standardized testing sometimes obstructs their natural instinct to learn. The school nowadays emphasize the importance of testing too much. It unfairly marginalizes some bright students, who perform badly in examinations. They would be labelled as disqualified students. What is more worrying is that they cannot find pleasures and interests in study. Consequently, they are deterred from pursuing knowledge.

Furthermore, examination causes superficial and linear thinking. Model answer is the most characteristic feature in examinations and tests. If students fail to fill in so called 'correct answer' , they cannot get the great result in examinations. However, human beings are naturally different and diverse; hence flourishing. students have different talents and abilities so education should not treat them on a standard scale. Additionally, some of the capacities could not be held in standard scale such as capacity for creation, capacity for dance, moral learning, etc. The standardized tests cannot evaluate such abilities so that Arts should not have any test.

I wish to conclude by reiterating that examination has a place in education. It should not be the essential element of education, but incidental, which should be a diagnostic measure to stimulate learning.










[ 本帖最後由 feifeifeifei 於 2014-12-10 07:35 AM 編輯 ]
   

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[隱藏]
Redundancy and word collocation errors are found in the first arguments

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回覆 2# a42442 的帖子

For instance?
Thanks a lot!

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However, some academics have come across a saying of " Tests and exams are a barrier to learning ".
==> However, test and examination has been regarded as a barrier to learning by some academics.
==>/However, the implication is that test and examination might inhibit the progress of their studies in some ways.
==> However, the notion regarding test and examination as a barrier to learning is gaining credence in the academic circle.
==> /However, some academics give credence to the notion regarding test and examination as a barrier.


In this following point, this essay aims to examine its pros and cons objectively.<---- 感覺上多餘+好似冇人會咁寫

建議:多睇BBC+英文書+査字典(記住!!!)+先唔好作文住

有錯請指正

[ 本帖最後由 sai1991ku 於 2014-12-19 10:01 AM 編輯 ]
The Chinese University of Hong Kong

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回覆 4# sai1991ku 的帖子

Thanks!!!!!!

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我覺得太多「補習社用語」,唔係唔好,但要適當+適量
淨係睇第一個point
First of all, It is easy to see the clear and obvious benefits from having tests and examinations. Standardized test has its function to assess the student's academic performances so that any school, including universities, secondary schools and even kindergartens, adopts this measure to collect students.
去到呢度,一半篇幅,淨係講到一個message:to assess students' academic performance (not student's)

As a result, testing is a way to get into schools, because it is the most fair and objective method to evaluate their performances. As regards educators, they could have a greater guidance to teach their students in terms of standardized teaching contents and materials.
呢度我覺得elaboration過快,fair test同greater guidance to teach中間有咩關係?

成段來講,最好要先有個main idea先,之後再elaborate

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Agree with cckwan
全篇文太補習社化、太公式化,令文章有種生硬啲感覺
頂盡攞到5

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回覆 7# neem 的帖子

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!
其實我為無補習
我上年考level 2...今年嘗試學多D Conjunction同句式希望可以令到篇文好D , 不過可能過多

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回覆 6# cckwan 的帖子

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!
其實我為無補習
我上年考level 2...今年嘗試學多D Conjunction同句式希望可以令到篇文好D , 不過可能過多

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引用:
原帖由 feifeifeifei 於 2014-12-11 10:43 AM 發表
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!
其實我為無補習
我上年考level 2...今年嘗試學多D Conjunction同句式希望可以令到篇文好D , 不過可能過多
你買本GRAMMAR 書做好過LOL

底打不好點作都差
The Chinese University of Hong Kong

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simple english is the best
簡單一句講出你要講既野,唔需要其他好靚既語言,都可以穩拿5
5以上既level係要睇你precise與否,這時才用上一些比較advance既vocab and sentence structure
勿「未學行,先學跑」

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回覆 11# cckwan 的帖子

THANKS!

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推!!!!!!!

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如果你話你上年係得2嘅話,我覺得你英文真係有好大進步

雖然有啲sentence係比較累贅,但係基本上grammar都accurate

ideas都sensible

但係試下唔好搞到篇文咁"官腔",唔好特登走去用啲望落去好似比較pro啲嘅字,咁樣反而會令篇文更唔自然

加油啦

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回覆 14# edogawaconan 的帖子

Thanks!!!

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