原帖內容: | IELTS task 2最常出現既係Agree/disagree type question
如果你係答to a xxx extent agree既話,寫完agree果邊,寫disagree既時候話 ‘Some people may believe that…’,聽落都幾合理,係咪?睇下以下例子:
Question: Early technological developmentshelped ordinary people and changed their lives more than recent developments.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 假設你立場係to a large extent disagree, 你篇文可能係咁:
1st paragraph=introduction
2nd paragraph= some may say that early technologies absolutely altered the lives of ordinary people,this is true because…
3rd paragraph=however, I believe that recent breakthroughs have had an even greater impact due to the following reasons…
4th paragraph=conclusion
究竟問題出係邊?
係咯,平時寫argumentative essay都係咁做駁論姐,有問題咩?LS都係咁答啦!
咁你就中伏啦!係IELTS入面,examiner想知你既意見,而唔係what other people think!係,你可能覺得係微小既分別,但偏偏就係有好多呢D細伏位,扣下扣下又無左個band!
咁如果真係想答to a xxx extent I agree/disagree (如果handle到,篇文的確會豐富過單一立場),應該點答?
一個字:WHILE!
While I accept XXX, I believe YYY is more justified.
以上面條問題為例,你可以咁樣寫:
2nd paragraph= It is undeniably true that early technologies absolutely altered the lives of ordinary people…
3rd paragraph= While the above argument is valid, I believe that recent breakthroughs have had amore significant impact…
只不過係換湯不換藥,內容一模一樣,但用左包裝就可以避免中伏,何樂而不為?
希望幫助到大家!
[ 本帖最後由 Simon 於 2015-6-1 08:56 PM 編輯 ] |