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[Eng] 2014DSE ENG Paper 2 Debating

2014DSE ENG Paper 2 Debating

2014 DSE Paper 2
4. Learning English through Debating

Currently, only a small number of students in your school have access to school lockers. As the chairperson of the Student Union of your school, you have collected the views of students from different classes on this issue. Write a letter to Ms Lee, your school Principal, to persuade her to change the policy on lockers.




Dear Principal,

Recently,there has been a myriad of hot discussions on the usage of lockers among junior and senior students.Due to the growing number of junior students in three consecutive years,most students who do not have their own lockers have to share the same locker with three classmates even more.As the chairperson of the Student Union,I would like to give some suggestions to make an improvement on the current circumstance after collecting various views from different classes.

To date,the members of the Student Union and I have gone to all classes to collect students's opinions on the usage of lockers.A total of 36 classes almost have the same idea that every student ought to have the right to possess their own lockers based on diversified rationales such as health as well as studies and the relationship with classmates and teachers.


Firstly,on behalf of the most students,I would like to talk about the influence on students's health without sufficient lockers.Not only do the junior students have complained about the unreasonable usage of lockers,but also the senior schoolmates.The senior students,who do not have a locker, said that they have to bring many thick and heavy books for everyday lessons.Besides,the junior students have relatively more lessons to attend.For example,Geography,Biology,Chemistry,Physics,History,IT,Music and so on.The rationale behind it is to let junior students have more chances to find their interested subjects and then select them as their electives for the senior Form.However,it is actually inconvenient,annoying and unhealthy for students to bear several kilograms to travel to and fro between school and home for a long period of time.Some junior students even represented that they had backache after bearing a heavy school bag for a long time.Morevoer,bearing too heavy books for a long time might affect schoolmates' growth and development.It is said that bearing too heavy things for a long time will make students' body shapes become shorter.


Secondly,I would like to talk about the bad effect on students' studies without ample lockers.After collecting views from junior classes,approximately hundreds of students said that because they do not have a locker to store books, they once forgot to bring suitable and enough books for their lessons,which severely affected their performance in lessons as they did not have the book to read and they would therefore chat with other students easily. Besides,some students also represented that the backache made them hard to have full concentration on lessons.Consequently,the problems above  conspire to make students have the bad academic results.

Thirdly,lacking enough lockers may lead to bad relationship among students and teachers.This is because most students have to share the same locker with three or above classmates,many of them had have conflicts on how to use a locker in a fair way.If they have many arguments and tiffs on it,their relationship must be going worse.Besides,some teachers will scold students who do not bring suitable books and punish them with detentions when they forgot to bring books for few times.Both problems make the relationship between a student and a teacher become worse.

In order to improve the above situation,the policy on lockers must be changed.As the chairperson of the Student Union,I would like to put forward some suggestions changing the current bad circumstance.

We know that the financial condition of our school is not that desirable.Thus,we understand that the school may not have good enough money to buy a locker for each student.Hence,we suggest buying more lockers,and then students can share a locker with fewer classmates.For example,a student can just share a locker with only one classmate.Other than buying more lockers to alleviate the situation of using lockers,we also suggest school allow students to buy lockers themselves such that school can save money and the problem of lacking lockers can be solved.

For the suggestions above,we think they are good news to students who do not access to lockers as they can store their books in the lockers,which in turns help prevent them from getting a backache.Besides,the chance of bringing unsuitable and insufficient books will be reduced greatly.Therefore,schoolmates can pay more attention to lessons and have good academic results.Moreover,students and teachers will not have any more conflicts on the usage of lockers and whether students bring ample and right books.Eventually,their relationship will be ameliorated.



Last but not least,I hope the policy on lockers can be changed as it is good news to both the students and the school in the long run.And I also hope that the suggestions above can really help school tackle the problem of lacking lockers.

Yours sincerely,
Chris Wong
Chairperson of the Student Union
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